Wednesday, November 22, 2006

Gooder writing tip #2.

Today's lesson: Phrasal adjectives and hyphens

Fancy words: Phrasal adjectives are also known as compound modifiers.

What I'm talking about:
Sometimes two words appear before a noun that describe the noun, a two-word adjective. To avoid confusion often a hyphen needs to be added to these two words to signify that together they make up the adjective. Most of the time little confusion exists, but sometimes it does.

For example:
Crazy cat lady vs. Crazy-cat lady. The first tells the reader that the cat lady is crazy; the second says that she is a lady who likes crazy cats.

Nasty looking glass vs. nasty-looking glass. The first tells the reader that the mirror is nasty; the second says that the glass looks nasty.

Fast moving van vs. fast-moving van. The first tells the reader that the moving van is fast; the second says that a van is moving fast.

Fancy pants store vs. fancy-pants store. The first tells the reader that the pants store is fancy; the second says that the store sells fancy pants.

Exceptions to this rule are proper nouns and verbs ending in "ly."

Proper nouns
I like Cyber Cafe coffee.
I like Hugh Jackman movies.
These do not need hyphens. Ambiguity is basically nonexistent.

Verbs ending in "ly"
Fiscally-conservative Republican = wrong. (The hyphen, not the person).
The "ly" already modified the "fiscal," so no need for a hyphen. It's redundant, such as saying it was 2:00 a.m. in the morning. (Bleeding-heart liberal needs the hyphen.) And ambiguity is once again unlikely.

Correct: Exceptionally beautiful wife

If you think of a good phrasal adjective whose lack of a hyphen would be detrimental, please leave a comment and share! I mean, really, can you think of anything more exciting to do with your time?

Hyphens are important. Amen.

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